Chapter Sixty Eight

She was hysterical on the phone. I was not sure what to think because even I was panicking anew. I didn’t want drama like I had said earlier on and I meant it. I was catching myself in a vicious circle. She told me that some guys had beaten up her soccer badly enough to lend him in hospital. Wow! Gorilla had done all that for me. I could either be proud our creeped out. That guy deserved the beat down but at times the punishment does not fit the crime. I needed to center myself, I needed to regroup and think. It was no longer a matter of what had I done more a matter of what should I do now. Ayanda had not finished, not only had the sissy boy taken out a restraining order against her but he had her charged her with second degree assault. This was bad. She was no longer just a bystander but now the main culprit. No wonder she was panicking. This guy obviously knew that I had done this but I am sure he figured out its easier to go through the poor little rich girl because she had no way of defending herself. At this point I felt they hadn’t beaten him enough. What is wrong with South African men ka nnete? They only have a back bone when they are putting women in what they think is their place! I was irritated, scared and annoyed at the same time! Why couldn’t he just take it like a man and move on?

She begged me to go to the police station and tell them that it wasn’t her who had done this. She had nothing to do with it. Whatever happened to taking bullets for one another? At home we had a policy that if ever someone was accused of doing something they had not done they could not rat out the real culprit. You would rather take the detention for someone else just to have your friends back. Even if it was just another classmate whom you were not really friends with, as students we stuck together. One thing I was learning be it slowly since I came to Johannesburg was that this was not high school. University had no feel of being family. This was each woman for herself and you had to be smart and aware of your surroundings. I don’t care how many adverts tourism makes but South Africans are not the friendliest people and the ubuntu message is just a way of them trying to fix a broken compass of togetherness. I told her to come pick me up. I was scared but just like I could get Gorilla to beat up people I could also get myself out of trouble with his help. I was fairly confident.

Ayanda was there in no time. She was red and puffy. She apologized for letting me do this but she said she could not afford for her parents to hear of this. Her dad had a temper she said. I said it was fine, this was the right thing to do. We went to Brixton police station where the charge had been made. The parking lot is tiny after you go through the gate and somehow Ayanda scratched her car which made her panic even more. When we got there I saw familiar faces, firstly it was the cop that had helped my aunt and another familiar face. Sitting on the other side was Rhudzani and some guy I didn’t know. Weird. Why was I all of a sudden bumping onto that soccer player and his people? Before I saw him in the elevator in the wee hours of the morning I had not seen him in a long time. Now not only was he trying to do something with Yandi but also was I at a police station because of him. I was now looking at one of his many women. Imagine I had Ayanda in the room; she was his shiny new toy, and Rhudzani, his discarded trash. When a guy dumps you for another girl I wonder what he calls you. It cannot be pleasant I can bet that with everything that I have.

I called Gorilla. He did not pick up. Maybe he was in hiding. I was all alone in this. You know at the moment when things are not going for you there are a lot of things that go through your mind. What if he had run back to Nigeria what would happen to Ayanda? Oh my lord this was too much to bear. Maybe I should refuse and throw Ayanda under a bus. She should do the right thing and take bullets. I went to greet Rhudzani just to get away from Ayanda. She recognised me and hugged me. She looked angry but scared at the same time. Funny how the story goes. The guy who was sitting with her was her boyfriend. It turns out he had beaten up some soccer player guy who had been messing with her at Milpark and because the police were looking for him he had come to turn himself in. I am not quite sure how the story goes but the soccer player (eish I wish I could say his real name to expose this moemish) had promised them money for an event he and his friends had hosted but had not paid them and instead called them sfebes and gold diggers. He had played them and promised them money and true to his DNA he had not taken it out when he was supposed to pay out. He had honestly thought he could away with doing whatever it is he does with them by buying them McDonalds’ at Campus Square! What a chancer and loser! They must beat him again shem and they must get their money back.

By the time we got to our turn the charges had been dropped. Ayanda was so relieved and now I wanted to save our friendship. She was angry at me and said to me,

“You can walk back; I can’t deal with you right now!”
And she left me there!

She drove out. Brixton police Station is in the dodgiest area and from Milpark its far! No right person could walk there at night and I doubt a cab driver would gladly come to this area. Was our friendship over with Ayanda?

As I was standing there thinking what to do next I got a text from N,

“Hi I am at the flat, I don’t have keys”

Made sense! She wouldn’t have taken keys in an ambulance. They were on her bed to be exact. I had to get home fast! Wow she was back! I was actually so excited for that fact. Another text message came in and I thought it was from her. I smiled when I saw the name for it meant I could get a ride home. It was from Python. The text said,

“Gorilla told me what happened and that you called him for help. Why didn’t you call me I had just left? You insist on running to him for help every time! Stay with him then. We are through!”

I sat down and cried!

****The End****

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Question: Have you ever had a partner who cheated on you with someone whom you knew very well and closely? What happened to that relationship with the person you knew?

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317 Comments

  1. Mba-lee

    Python has finally grown some, I was wondering when he was going to wake up. Im glad this police situation is sorted now and Ayanda- the nerve!!

    • Tumi

      Hai Thandeka lwena you deserve it shame, you are you always running to him vele? akere Python o teng, o is he there just for sex? hmmmmm decide mtwana, if you want python then kgaohana le gori wa Modimo o dula omo kenya nthong tsa hao

  2. Re_Fancy

    it seems like bad luck follows Thandeka wherever she goes. Shame mahn ke sono…. Great read Mike. Thanx again

  3. Miss Mab

    As a woman I’ve realised that if u love a man you don’t let them do things that will get them in trouble or even use the man

  4. True there Thandeka why are you always calling G:? Ayi nawe man P wants you to want him show him that you need him com’on gal “Wake up” you need to play ur cards rite here can’t afford to loose P baby no way!! unjani kanti??????

  5. Kelz

    Eish maan Thandie kesono kawena shem….yoh my ex cheated mith my unrelated cousin(her mom nd my uncle were dating and had a child)the way it unfolded was like a movie u know when they play that dramatic scene in slow motion?yep that was me on new years eve 2005 thank goodness it was a long distance thing,,,it broke me nonetheless coz I truly loved him…but I’m over it now..we tried fixing it but all 3 relationships were never the same.

  6. Tebby Letsie

    Wow! I’m not sure if I should call Python a donkey hole, but at the same time he had a point. No, a POINT. Poor Thandeka, just when she escapes drama ka lesoba la nale, she gets hit by a truck! Shame! Why Ayanda a simolla ka bobelete? Nxa!
    NEXT CHAPTER MIKE!

  7. Vuyiseka

    Oh my word mara Thandeka wat u r doing is rili wrong. You always run to G nd nt P nami i wuld b jealous shame. Sorry i feel sorry for you.

  8. Maria

    Oh shame so now its over between her and the guy she love,friendship between her and ayanda also finished ,iyooo hectic…Well done Mike

  9. nanah mlaba

    No python is bng unfair now doesn’t he know thandeka loves her.Mike this is getting very interesting can’t wait for the next chapter

  10. Eulenda P

    Shame poor Thandie,she’s about to lose Yandy,now her Python,aowa hle…n vele she was gonna try one more tym to call G 4 lift to her flat…mara she could’ve called pythy though!!!

  11. mrs kola

    Thandeka u must stop running to G le wena n P aowa u can’t dump her nooooo… Give her another chance, next chapter pls pls Mike

  12. mamakhee

    Aaah P’s ego bruized tltltlt maybe now Gorrilla will get the shagg,,,yhoo from one to the next I hope not.

  13. babsido

    My ex cheated on me with my “friend” and we broke up. 6 months into their relationship she fell pregnant but they never made it through the pregnancy. They broke up before the child was born

  14. kayteel

    @mac u kill me man,why slaughter a cow but? Kwaaaaa!
    Oh Thandeka trouble seems to be following u nje.Kutheni nawe maan ufownela uGorilla?

  15. iamThabby

    Lool ayanda daznt understand nna I’d b grateful if ma frnd dd dat fOr me dat guy gOt wat he deserved he’s tjatjarag shem lol

  16. Kayra

    The way I’m so hooked 2 this diary thou, it aint funny.. Thanx Mike, hope u busy wit chapter 69 already.. I feel 4 u coz we demand so much but u dd this 2 urself coz u soooo good..

  17. LadyK

    So typical!!! Men like Python love playing this game, making you feel guilty for absolutely nothing. Hayi suka Thandeka, u r better off without him. He’s a user n trouble maker 9-9. Use this opportunity to get out of this ray race. U’ll b so much happier for that decision… or is dat my mature reasoning revealing itself… lol

  18. NSM

    Python and Ayanda deserve one another, nx… Yini vele Python, 2 shags don’t make you a full time boyfriend, not unless ushelile waqonywa – really now!!! Usenza sengathi bebekwi exclusive r/ship!! Go piss off with your Yum Yum crab Python. T clean your life up, you’ll find even a bigger P than this loser.

  19. Pearlita

    Oooh ouch kodwa what is phython doing nogal and this Ayanda is a fool I rather have a friend who saves me from heartbreakers like dat soccer player hawu bathong

    • Tony

      Give the author a break! Remember, this is Thandenda’s diary. She is Zulu and she cannot pronounced nor spell names of Venda people correctly. I do not know any Zulu person who can. Also the spelling and grammar mistakes here are intentional … Remember this is a diary of a first year Zulu girl who is exposed to Johannesburg for the first time. And for the good in me, most first years cannot muster the English language or spelling of other languages other than their own.

      • Im so in luv with the blog ! Shem T i feel u ,P must give us a break not now asseblief o .who a we going to get Shaggy with it ??? cause clearly G is like this size *small fingure *

  20. Minkie

    Lol…Aya very spoild, so much 4 a frnd to save ur ass then drop her wilderness i say u FaKe! Thandeka nawe u made sum1 feel unappreciated…P hai suka u nt the wen she needs u so let it go n stop being a boi!

  21. LazyG

    My boyfriend went out with my bestfriend in high school I was hurt beyond words bt I told them it was ok maybe he and I were jst not meant to be. I genuinely forgave them, after a while I met the sweetest guy ever who made feel like a princess and she came after him too! That’s when I knew she was up to no good and cut her off my life for good, fortunately the guy loved me too much to fall for her traps

  22. Mbali

    To answer the question: Yes. We all worked together for the same company. Boyfriend and “his side piece” worked for the same department on the same floor. He probably thought I’d neva find out. But I did. And it was one of the reasons why I dumped him. And remained single for a very long time thereafter. I strongly believe as women that we need tto love and empower ourselves enough to have the coirage it takes to exit a toxic situation with out dignity intact. “Side piece” and I eventually became friends. She’s a pleasant person. She was as innocent as I was in the triangle coz “boyfriend” was a master lier. Probably still is!

  23. Tilo

    Ao I jst went out of da web 4 few min alrdy 75 comments dats hw we lov ur wrk!I didn’t even read!str8 2 comment!addicted

  24. Fulu

    I never heard Ayanda say one bad thing about the soccer player for telling lies to the cops about her….mmmm instead she attacks T. Yessess! How ungratefull.

    And for a rich and educated kid…she is dumb man! There was no proof that she did it, all she had to do was deny deny and deny some more….that is why the charges where dropped!

    P is never availabletho… but I think he is more dangerous than G, the quiet ones always are….maybe T senses it. P would probably have killed that Soccer player for messing with his woman…Crimes of passion, you know “things of that nature”

    Next chapter please.

  25. Nomazethu

    Kodwa why is this question being asked? Opening up wounds I thought had healed. Funny how you think you know people. I was so comfortable with both of them, opening up to them kanti they knew. I would not have suspected a thing but you know how aquentainces get spitful, so they told me nje straight up what a fool I am. But eventualy I have healed, speak to both of them. But sometimes, sometimes I just want to confront and ask the girl. You know how us girls are, when we know things well, I wonder if she ever asked him abt me. I still wana know the details from her side thou. What went through her mind. I had considered her a friend afterall.

  26. Nawe Thandeka you claim you like Python then why call his friend everytime you have a problem! And you know what im sure P knows about your hand job that you gave G, guys do kiss and tell you know! Eish but i really wanna cry with you hey, go to him and beg gal

  27. Lydia

    Is python insane cause the last time I checked thandeka was not sure whether they were dating or not. Now this guy haven’t confirmed that thandeka is his gf so out of nowhere hw he tells thandeka they’re through…mxm that’s insanity at it’s best I tell you

  28. Larnie Tee

    hi mike and all, ur blog has been very interesting however I feel I’m slowly losing interest due to the waiting for the next chapter and I’ve also noticed how short the chapters have become. this is off putting pls readjust to ur old ways. Thanks

    • The chapters i can assure have remained between 1100 and 1300 words from the very first chapter. You dont mess with a winning formula. I post on alternative dates e.g. Monday its Confessions, Tuesday its Diary, Wednesday Confessions… I cannot write a chapter a day of each because it kills the creativity and its hard to maintain. At least when i alternate i come up with new ideas for the next chapter.

      • MsMbali

        We do understand Buti,your writing takes us with the mind and see what is happening in thandeka or Nelisa’s world.

  29. Khekhe

    uhhhm okay 1stly it doesnt really matter if u top 1, 2,6 commentin on de blog, like really now..
    2ndly i jst love de suspense Mike.. Could u be our next South Africa Tylor Perry?? Awesome #thumps up#

  30. P z such a bby hw cn he do this 2 T cz yena alwayz he z nt available or bizzy. Ayanda z a spoil brat qha n T supposed to sit down n start afresh her lyf n get out of trouble n consentrate in her school work finish n klaar

  31. Zama

    Thandeka got dumped by Python… OUCH… now she is stuck with Gorilla and his stick between his legs lol… thats sad

  32. Carol

    Well done Mike , cant wait for the next chapter .To answer your question , yes my partner cheated with a gal he worked with and she knew me very well , she got pregnant , but they separated .

  33. ontiretse

    But why did she call Gorilla vele, and the house issue again….stay with him lol Python is so sweet, he’s a softy

  34. Marco

    @Rudzani, hasn’t Mike earned the poetic licence to name his roles whatever he wants? And maybe in this story Rudzani’s birth certificate really had Rhudzani and the name stuck.

  35. Pretty grow up! Stop this AM First kaka! Anyway to answer u, I have neva had it bt mafrend slept wth ma ex bt ws scared to tell bt I found out and told to calm down its al gud!

  36. Mmapallo Molakeng

    Poor Thandeka. Is one misfortune after the other. Let’s hope the is light @ the end of the tunnel.

  37. Princess

    Hope you’re not going to leave us hanging this night,please do post the latest chapters from both books toe. I’m very interested in what’s going to happen to Thandeka&python’s not so clear relationship I’ve come to enjoy these two and I love python I wish I had python too*hides*

  38. Gud staff mike even thw its getting shorta anyway Thandeka killed wen she says”I called Gorilla. He dnt pick u. He was in hiding! Lol imao kwwwakwwaa!

  39. But then again P you have never stepped out to the plate to claim T she’s been doing the chase all along even after that you wud still make excuse like when she was horny she had forgotten abt you cos she tried to reach you nd you were not willing to come to the party NOTHING PISSES ME OFF LIKE A GUY WHO’S NOT CERTAIN WETHER HE’S IN TO YOU OR NOT please don’t do me any bloody favours eithr you in or out period !!!! sorry T but P is an anaconda lol where it counts so SOS.baby he’s got game sugar bt the ball is in ur court skatlam.

    • ndzondi magwada

      that is so true Zaza P maybe amazing where it matters (bed) but he’s not willing to step up really. He must know that a girl expects a man to be a man in more ways than that.

  40. Bongis

    He madoda. N, is Nelisa from Confessions. Malume is the sugar daddy that took her to Sun City, kudala bayenza this thing, no wonder he got her free accomodation @ his wife’s expense. That is why there was bad blood when they met at N’s hospital bed. They know each other before they moved to Bloem

  41. ndzondi magwada

    lol weee Thandeka I grew up in P.E. and it’s so amazing that our up – bringing is so similar. The point where you say that “you don’t rat out the culprit” is true , with us (friends or family) we called it “ukufel’ismoko” today it’s me tomorrow it will be somebody else.

    The cheating part……….I never had that experience before but with us girls it means that girl is your enemy for life not your man. Yhaaa not fair nhee.

  42. Sedi

    Heee baneee !!! Vele Thandeka shouldve called Python in the first place and I understand where his anger is coming from. Mara Thandeka le ene!!

    Thanks Mike, this story just keeps getting better and better.

  43. Blackpearl

    hay Hay Ayanda, uyi drama queen but i love this, its a time killer ntombazana, you know what you must learn to accept critisism as constructive, learn from it, use it as your step ladder, these people who critiseze you as if they are perfect, they are not, we are not, nobody is perfect and some of young tertiary gals can lean a thing or 2 here, men lure gals with money for ruining their lives…..i love this, keep them coming,…..even if bekuthuka bekubiza ngayo yonke into, stand for what you believe in and this is it……Mina gifuna ukwazi ukuthi iyozala nkomoni….

  44. Bonza

    Gorilla is a big man and Thandeka has seen his violence when he threw that boy flying out of the club he first night she came to joburg. So I’m sure she felt he was the best man for the job. Besides you respect people you love and you don’t just go around involving them in silly brawls chin, Python shud understand

  45. Gumiebear

    Awwww Python tho… But no Thandeka somehow deserves this…. Mandigo is through with her games… Shame man. Its really sad yaz. Hai!

  46. annastancia

    Hai hai Thandeka mara shme bby gal 4ever in dramas now you’ve lost ur beef cake mandingo shme sweets I feel 4 u as 4 Ayanda she isn’t a frnd

  47. babygal

    I don’t blame Python for sending that text, she deserved it. She should’ve went to him for help and not Gorilla, that’s what partners are for, and to think of all the trouble he went through to keep her aunt out of jail!!Stupid little girl!!!!

  48. lisa

    N0000000000000!!!!! No python I hate u…#crying# da fuq who do u think u r…nxi wena thandeka u must show him flames nxi…

  49. Kamo

    Wow i am thoroughly shocked…if Python was happy shagging Samke but doesn’t like Thandi getting help from Gorilla?…..Death @ “wish I could say his real name to xpose the moemish!”….hahahaha Mr Maphoto I take my hat off to you

  50. Nooooo Thandeka please explain things to Python please n nawe stay with one dude I can understand his reason. Let go Gorrila please #Crying don’t mess this up

  51. Kwena

    Great write Mike keep it up hey
    Hee wena when it comes to that I think I’m haunted back in 1999 my first bf cheated on me with my best friend and we told each other at school tht we were dating the same guy I was disgusted he said he was sorry and that I was the one he loved luckily for me he left our place for good and thanx God I refused to sleep with him and again this year march I posted a ststus on fb about being blocked dungmb ass ex was angry because I gggalways disagreed with his status updates so my status caught this girl I knew since primary because he told her that if she disagrees with his views she will be blocked and I was the example she pestered me to tell who is de guy tht I blocked when I told her she was surprised and I disgusted even more I told him to remove himself from my life because I didn’t want anything to do with him(loser) told her that she should keep him and we still friends even my best friend we still we were joking about it on new year

  52. Malefa

    Mara vele why did she phone G?! I feel sad for her, its not nice to be dumbed, especially beacuse she really likes P… shem….

  53. It happened to me Mike. I discovered that ma boyfriend was cheating on me with this “friend” of mine. I discovered it and then I confronted them and ngabatshela ngobufebe babo…after that ngangena ku kitchen yakhe lo sisi, bekunamanzi abilayo ekitilini yakhe ngasengw’a thatha lamanzi ngawachitha ngabeseng’thela abandayo…manje yena bekaloku ecabanga ukuthi kunamanzi abilayo phakathi waqala manje ukukhwaza ngasengimthela ngawo wavela waqaleka losisi. After that I kicked ma boyfriend in the nuts…like really hard and I left them there. I’ve never seen the gal after that. My boyfriend and I tried working out the relationship but it never worked out and we broke up for good.

  54. Cleo

    From the start I questioned the thing of her calling Gorilla when she is in trouble and leaveing Python out… Great writting Mike* hooked for days*

  55. Thandeka n N from confession shud fly 2geda tjo,really money make their world go round,de question is’is dis N de same as Thandeka’s rum mate,if so den N had it going for ages n is about time she reeps what she planted.

  56. Gugu

    Can people stop writing commenting on who got to read 1st, it doesnt matter we all get to read it. I read it 5 or 10mins later it makes no difference we are reading the same thing. Comment on the content not on who got here 1st. Please lets grow up

  57. Zamakhwane

    Ayanda and thandeka are now going to be frenemies! Mike thank you for keeping us entertained.god bless u abundantly and may he provide all your heart desires according to his glorious riches,and never forget to thank god for your ability to write when you make it big!

  58. Agatha

    OMG!!! Python dumped her?? Like I’m sad hey! I won’t lie!! WTF.. I only started reading this blog/story yesterday I’m already here… Next chapter asseblief!!!

  59. Thabie

    ay Thandeka, I don’t know how you manage to get yourself in these situations… Great blog Mike, looking forward to the next chapter

  60. Tippy

    hehehehee!! Aw shame mandigo feels belittled hle..he’s js bein used for his ‘greatest asset’ and that’s it! Ai ke sono

  61. Nkullz

    Ayanda will thank Thandeka once she realises what she saved her from…at this atage vele her relationship with that soccer player was just an infactuation…she’ll come arround.
    Thandeka shame…go home and sleep it off babe **thinking of how it feels to be dumped**

  62. SP

    Python u r the last person to uba nesikhwele. Remeber when uTandeka caught u no S shagging yo brains out??? I mean Thandeka ddnt do shit bt uyakhweleta muntu wesilisa. Haybo! Light(a) Jesu…

  63. thuli

    Top 200 to comment :) whoop whoop.. Thnx mike.. Ey mara bra Mike they Vendas are not happyoooooo u cnt call Rudzani Rhudzani now, even if its ur character lol

    Arrgg Thandie, u knw what sweety, they dnt deserve u both the rich brat and that slithering snake. U just dnt go after them go back to ur books wena bhabha myself and N are here for you, I’ll be your new friend and u cn kick asses for me, dnt discard Gorilla though, keep him @ the back seat in case we need him one day.

    Oh I need to get u hme nw dnt I? Okay ummm call malume or K

    • soso.za

      I like ur comment Thuli, not evn a sound of weakness…enough said(as a result of not fthr reading othr comments)

  64. madam coco

    Yazi reading a chapter once in two days makes me even forget some other characters and have to think hard who’s that person when they appear 10 chapters later. I think I’m gonna wait till the blog is finished then I can read.

  65. KG

    My bf was cheated with a very close friend. Our friendship ended cos she should have know better and our relationship ended too,,,think they deserved each other though cos real friends don’t do such.

  66. lili

    You cannot leave us hanging like that though. Please don’t take too long on the next chapter. My gosh this blog got me hooked. You talented man. Your writing skills are impeccable.

  67. Nash

    Firstly this was a great read. Poor Thandi, one shit after the other. The rich girl can go jump man, thandi saved her from hell. Its a pity about her and Python *sigh*.

    To all those who say” i am first” please check the comments above u, because u r in fact number four or six at times.

  68. anonymous

    MIKE as much as m a free rider n enjoy t lol….. bt i thnk your work is brilliant and it should not jst end here, with this kind of talent u cn go places……u cn write broo n u r so creative, jst what we need in SA, tired of generations…..put ur talent 2 work dnt waste t with us so that we cn comment @ da end each chapter…..M NT SAYIN U SHUDNT CONTINUE, PLS DU……. jst rescue us from generations or write a book………jst sayin

  69. Maishibe

    I am a stauch follower of your blog. always have since the beginning. I feel as though this blog has somehow lost its touch. particularly the last three chapters. I dont mean to offend you but honestly these chapters were rather a bore. The only time I felt chapte 68 was exciting was at the end when Python Dumps Thandeka. I understand its alot of work trying to keep the fire burning but I would rather you spent time being creative other than give me material that aint exciting. You are one of the phenomenal writers that I admire so much right now I but I dont understand what happend with this chapter. anyway I apologise in advance if I have stepped on your toes. will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter

    #Loyal Follower

  70. phile

    Wow it was just on tueday when I started reading this book n now I dd catch up with it… Can’t wait for the nex chapter….
    This is such a great book :)

  71. Mr P

    Thandeka should just call the sisie (gay friend). He’ll be there in no time n she can can fill him with the latest m’gozi

  72. Doreen

    Aowa i e-mailed u and no reply, and 4 sum strange reason i cnt find u when i search u on fb, so cn u pls inbox me 1st cz m realy interested in the Charity drive plzzz

  73. noli

    Shame poor Thandeka u were only trina help d naive Ayanda. If she doesn’t wanna hear yo side of d story – then just let her go. She doesn’t deserve u or u don’t deserve her,I don’t know cos nawe u trouble with capital T.

    2 answer yo question Mike: it happened 2 me. Met my X after a 18 month drought. Everything was 2 gud 2 b true, d bastard cooked 4 me, bought me presents, dinning me out.8 months in2 d relationship moved 2 my hometown…….and then Boom cheated with my friend, next door neighbour. I was HURT and asked the X 2 break things up btwn them but didn’t. Was even more devastated by the fact that X chose my ‘friend’ over me by not ending things with her. Now I know better than 2 ever give a person stupid ultimatums. They didn’t last and 3 years later the friend told me what went down btwn them and what a bastard our ‘X’ was or is. I laughed – Karma is a Biatch 4 real. She knew I was dating the person so how did she think it would turn out. We still talk no hard feelings. Holding it against her wud just be as stupid as the stunt she pulled.

  74. Omg, can Thandeka have a normal week already.. Drama free, python n Gorilla free, sex free.. Can she focus on school n can we get updated on how she’s doing @ school (her grades). I don’t wish for Thandeka’s life shem.. Love u Mike, always interesting

  75. Otis Ray

    Gud work Mr M and o kase kgotsofatse batho ba botlhe! Some readers will just comment for the sake of commenting. Wa motseba M. O. T. H. O mos. Thandeka ena must just learn and haowa P ena he’s right bathong. He just feels gore he’s not a man enough.

  76. Wow.I am so hooked to this book I now understand what it means to be a drug addict,not that I’m promoting drugs .I’m hooked and can’t wait for the next chapter

  77. eriberry

    Ah ah ah ish xme now python is dumpin poor thandeka,mxm ths is nt fair tj0…..waitin 4 anada chapter #NytMadE!!!!

  78. Pumla

    Yepiiih 1st time commenting. Thandeka is a very strong women, python plz dnt damp the gal are u tht dum nt 2 c hw mch she like u she is nt s she dnt cheat wth frwnds. lol good book sham i love it

  79. portia

    I fully understand where Thandeka comes frm her relationship with Gorrila is defined they r frnds! Uyini no Python! Next thing she is overstepping lines ! Great read by the way

  80. Brenda

    Wow!! Great work ur doin Mike…gosh,must u keep us waiting so long for the next chapter mara?? M so looking forward to going to the Orphanage home in Soshanguve,and I would also love to make a contribution to them. My Contact is 0744673586

  81. joycheyeza

    Ow xem,Thandeka wa vanhu,playng da supahero 4 Ayanda,lol,luk @ how xi turned her bek on u,but u were only tryna help,shame girl…n y u alwayz running 2 Gorilla,don’t u trust Python?u think he’s not man enuf to fyt 4 ur battles,but only 2 satisfy ur nidz?ey lol, can’t wait for da next chapter

  82. Phago

    Tis days things a hpping i’ve nave been 2 a party in mi lyf am in mi late 20 an nw am bored 2 death with mi lfy, i don’t rememba da last tym i went 2 cinema tjo. Wat gal 2 do nw ppl its lyk i jst exist n da so called lyf is passing by.

  83. I can’t wait for de series on tv I wish u find new faces for casting . Thandeka is unfair to be always running to g when she’s getting her groove on with p let p b de man everywhere

  84. Dark 'n Lovely

    Hau but Mike…thought you knew how much I loved Python. Please don’t end them, he seems grounded in all this drama that follows Thandeka. And I mean she did turn to him when she needed help with S’s parents wanting answers to that 150K- kiss ‘n make up. Whatever you write next tho…I can’t wait

  85. Tasha

    I’v had that happen to me 1nc. Best friend slept with my boyfriend of 2yrs. That was th ultimate betrayal, but as time went on, I forgave them both. 2yrs after our relationship ended, coz it just never was th same again.

    My friend & r still friends up to this day!

  86. basi

    I think python was right to tell her they through! the man respected her enough to use protection with her even though she wanted it raw. He goes out of his way to help her with her aunt. so he must have felt utterly useless when Gorilla told him she asked him for help. Truth be told he was bragging to python you sleeping with her but she needs me more than you. Thandeka is stupid for not noticing that to python she is way different to S. she is not just a quick shag but a lady in his eyes.

    Love how this chapter ended

    hoping she loses everything in 69 time for the rural Thandeka to return while her dignity is still intact for now.

  87. mamgobhozi

    Gosh, some people just can’t help but complain.*smh* there’s absolutely nothing wrong with this blog.
    Great work as always Mike, just love how the 2blogs are starting to gel with each other!!

    Will patiently wait for the next chapter.. Xoxo

  88. mamgobhozi

    & @tony THANK YOU, I couldn’t have said it better myself. These complains & constant criticizing just spoils the mood. Why can’t we just read the chapter comment on the content & move on…?? Some people tho *baffled*

  89. Lmao*Burugudlu dead vele Palesa*???….
    Mr Mike u ar jst too good sir reali respect yo work,dnt stop nw plz…I’m jst too addicted 2 dis
    I luv evritin abt dis,I thnk we cn all relate 2 dis story nd some chapters 2 it especially teenage life…
    You shud b proud of yoself sir#salute.

  90. ka Luu and Sbuu!

    Iyoooooh can chapter 69 be released already.. Ay naye uTDK she makes ths python guy azive ngathi he is not man enough hayi asebenzela uG nogal iyo

  91. madam speaker

    Mike i wuld also like to donate bt i dnt knw hw u gnna gt my donation coz in Jhb’s cuzin Dbn u said lol… u a gud ryta neh

  92. Xo

    Been Resisting comment for the past few weeks. Mike, I am turning 40 next birthday. Wealthy, Divorced, and chatting to an extreemely beutiful 21 year old on BBM for a few months now. No physical involment yet. Met her on her 21st birthday bash. After reading the blog, I am seriously considering what it means to be a sugar daddy for this 21 year old. I am ending it coz I wouldn’t want my 15 year old daugter to date a man twice her age. Keep up the good work and loose the charitable events, NGOs etc. Focus on cormecializing your writing. You can’t be all things to all people. Your writing has been suffering in the later chapters after you started spending too much time on charity. I think from that chapter on the QwaQwa charity drive, and its been downhill after Soshanguve. Your choice, your blog. Free advice is not always free.

    • Thank you so much for the advise. I am trying to change the forum for the charity as is so your advice is most welcome. Relationships are a trick business nowadays because keeping a secret is more difficult in todays age. Making a decision that suits you and your daughter means sacrifices at times. I hope it all works out for you.

      Thank You

  93. Dee-p

    I will get down for my girl…Ayanda just ain’t that #¿§, if there were no charges is it only then she would see this was done for her, Thandeka stop crying get yum yum back

  94. Tlaleng

    Wow so much talent Mike thank u but I wish thr was another chapter thiz book is soo gud I cnt get enough of it!!!next chapter pliz

  95. Kay2

    I don’t like hey! He can’t just break up with her. Besides I have a crush on Python, I might just date a nigerian lol. No seriously I hope they get back 2gether. #soo_hooked#

  96. Janda

    Yeah, a friend of mine dated my boyfriend at the time. I bliksimed her real good, told her parents that she’s slept with my baby daddy (needless to say, the guy she’s slept with wasn’t my baby daddy but I wanted her to be in real shit with her parents as well. I then went to my boyfriend and smashed his windscreen. Cut all ties with both of them and moved on!!!!!

  97. clara

    Stil waitn for chapter 69 wishing der ws a tv drama mike u r a good teller ne u can write my broo im enjoyin read dis chapter seems to b addicted shem T mr P forgive her x is freezing abt him dis G is jealous y mara he is doing dis to T pls T stop seen him if u sort ur thing out wth P

  98. Tookie_R

    Finished all 68 chapters in 6 hours. What a good read, although some parts have grammar issues. Anyway, lol you’ve experienced so many things at 19, wow. Bosso ke wena hay..

  99. zizi

    you know Mike u really know how this things are im really hooked i keep on checking the web for the next chapter ,is there any way where i can get a notification if the next chapter is out the suspense is killing me really

  100. refiloe

    I’m sad y python y I feel like he just dumped me, n I was starting to enjoy their relationship the it goes out da window haai mara she shot her self in da foot with a pump gun

  101. Azania

    Funny you should mention NGO’s, ive been researching on how to start one, the paperwork, the types of NGo’s out there and i even ended up subscribing to the SANGoNET (NGO PUSLe), which is a newsletter for NGO’s. I would love to be part of the NGO and of this great initiative
    My contact details are:
    Sisonke Tom
    078 565 7531
    s.tom@venture-sa.co.za

  102. Cutie

    Wow, what a dilemma…….aggaaahh shame Mathandis feel sorry for you gal! after what u’ve gone thru get dumped by sms. Maybe “P” does’nt mean it just playing with you,,,,,,,,,Ok Mike please continue with the chapters from 69……..

  103. RonnieG

    Which guy dumps a girl by sms? Hayi python, u have disappointed me. Anyway I think it was gud that u tried to help Ayanda. Men think they can bull **** women en get away with it. Ayanda will understand some day that u were saving her en actually took the bullet for her in the process therefore u r a “friend for keeps”

  104. Ladylulu

    I don’t think Thandi will lose P, the brotha just needs to cool down and he will remember that wonderful love-making that made him tremble…uzokhumbula ekhaya. Ungakhali kakhulu sisi…lol. Kodwa on the other kumele uyokhishwa isinyama…

  105. U can’t stop now plz keep wrytng!!! As 4 uP ayi akame kancane lowo koda nawe thandeka ay sisi wehlule shem udinga ukuhlabela abapantsi coz akulungu kuyembulwa kuyembeswa hectic life

  106. Phago

    Tjo whn u realy nid him he ain’t thr mara sono neh next pls…. Bra mike nice work and those who threatnds u i say da truth hurts neh ke lyf boss have a nic weknd
    2 ue question yes mi ex cheated with mi frnd thn we broke up thy hooked n after 3yrs she cheated with a tearcha thn she had a child, she didn’t knw who da dad was she pickd mi ex till 2day but we knw why she pick him but thy are nt 2gethr nw its true wat goes arund u knw da rest peace-out…..

  107. Percy

    OMG…as I scrolled down hopping to find next but I didn’t….nxt chapter plz plz…I’m soo inlove with ur work now this is real Raw talent …watch the space Universe

  108. Thozama Maphekula

    Tjo Thandeka nooo you shouldnt be this close to Gorilla and claim to love your Python, no Gorilla is bad news, yes he is helping you now but when he wants payback it will be too much for you. You will be in much more trouble i tell. Speed up the chapters please Mike i always forget what happened in the last chapter and have to read the previous one lol, great writing nonetheless

  109. princess

    Wow powerful writing linking all these real life events in ur story this is wat most blog should be used for ukwakhana (uplifting). Good job keep it up ….

  110. Daphney

    Python’s ryt bt gal u gotta stop cryin n gt ur man bck bcos he ansad da qstn u were askin urslf al ths tym ‘he ws ur man’… As 4 Ayanda da poor gal’s nt used 2 drama bt leavin u at da station wat a bitch

  111. andy

    Wooooow I can’t wait for the next chapter Mike keep up the good work bro I can relate to thandeka a lot the worst that happened to me was being caught with cocaine at a depot in mossel bay with my nigerian BF it was stuffed on a teddy bear I heard the police say maam you have a right to remain silent… Before he could even finish the sentence I knew the sh** had gone down mind you it was on 31 Dec I was expecting my matric results while people were celebrating I was praying for a miracle to happen in a cell until the 2nd of Jan my mother knows nothing about it till today Thandeka you better find your way out those guys are dangerous trust me been there done that!

  112. Tebogo

    Hey Mike I wish you can make A movie out of this
    To answer your question my friends and I have an unwritten rule you do not go where the other friend has been. Being it an ex from 100 years ago let alone current man… It happened only once and I walked away from both…

  113. blue

    Thnx mike, great work! Its alwys a great read. Ei niyadina ke manje, ‘ I’m on the top 5, top 5 yani? N plz stop it with the rudzani thing, it still reads the same. Can’t wait for the next chapter

  114. masetshaba

    I started 3 days ago to read this but I’m already addicted every I’m my office joined, keep up the good work mokone u made us proud.

  115. Glenda

    Pathon must get his story ryt! I mean de poor gal didn’t knw it was gonna be such a big deal 2 call sum1 who had mussles bigger than his! Ai man en their egos

  116. Very interesting indeed but one thing I would like to know is…is this shxt real? Like is it a true story? Wow Thandeka in just a month so much drama lolz next chapter please

  117. v-v

    Wen is the next chapter coming out mike u got my totally hooked 4 3days,,, feels like u got me wet 4 nothng,, nw I’ve 2 wait 2 get tht wet again,,,,,

  118. thabang

    I would just like to commend the writer on doing something that was lacking i.e. To bring the characters to life..I am so hooked its not even funny I can’t wait for chapter 69…

  119. yanga

    I’ve been recommended by a fwend here……. Wow what everyday life challenges we face as young people in these varsities……..I’m really hooked thanks to Mike

  120. Lalla-Lee

    Honestly Python has a point, afta all running 2 ur “bf”s mate whenever u need help is not ayoba. Bt on the other hand he’s being heisty in his decision 2 end it wit T. Next chapter plz!!!

  121. @sliekhoza

    SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Thandeka uyangena enkingeni nawe bakithi . But seriously why you didn’t call Python for help?

  122. Dineo

    Wow this blog has caused quite a stair and for all the right reason.A job well done Mike can’t wait for the next chapter.

  123. Mathapelo

    P is right he is your man and he is the one who is suppose to protect you not his friend, stop it and talk to your man. Next chapter plz plz plz

  124. Sigoz

    Yoh Mike, guys let me share this one with u. I relocated frm home then I met with this guy had a gud tym knw wat I mean. Then I moved bck home, he wsnt staying there as well. Whn I got home I met up wit this guy n we had relationship only to later find out that they these 2 guys r cousins. I broke up with him. Then told that 1st one coz I loved him, still do. Evryth ws ok, we revived our things then it hit him, wat had hpnd btwn me n the couz. Ws nt cul hey. But we gud now atlist taking one step at the tym, bcoz of the lav we hav I beliv its wats kipn us whr we r today.

  125. Madam Lulu Malungas

    Cum to think of it-how wud u feel if u had a partner that runs to yo friend or any1 close to u anytym when in crisis ? Maybe yo partner doesn’t trust u enaf to handle a situation for them. Thandeka was suppose to call Python,then he’ll decide what to do. If he feels Gorilla shud be part of this,he’ll call him himself. Give the man his place,let him fail afta an effort.

  126. Woow ddnt c dat 1 cumin_shame Thandeka…da drama
    In her life just doesn’t end eyy…but I must sy
    Python has a point dr…y run 2 Gorilla???I min really!!

  127. Hi! I have been reading your blog and have always wanted to start my own but somehow I could not get round to doing it. Reading this blog has reawakened my need for a blog but I have no idea where and how to start. Could you please help me

  128. Kholu

    Yalls nagging on how this guy is slow n how you are loosing track of characters n how the length of chapters are now short, n the gramma police, you should just grow wings n start writing your own blogs n let me be your follower. And to the counting commentors ke number1 or two or whatever… just grow up! And by the way the question is have u ever been cheated on by your boyfriend with your bestfriend?

  129. zandie

    To answer your question iv had rumours that my boyfriend is dating my collegue,have no proof I asked him he denied dumped him,he refused to end it with me..thou I have no proof I go by the saying “there is no smoke without fire”…at last chapter 68 lovely!!

  130. Sherine

    Please please Mike, you cannot keep us in suspense like this, i really cannot wait to see how this woman’s life ends up, either dead like her friend, with a child like N or HIV+… Please continue asap.

  131. Palesa Moloi

    Yoh I love it,I love it 4rom chapter 1-69, I hope this block opens some other ladies out there who are simple(dilahla) u know life is too short guys

  132. TAILOR

    WTF is up with being first?????????
    Stop it with that!!!!!!!!

    The chapters haven’t gotten any shorter, we are just expecting way too much now because we’d rather have a new chapter everyday, and stop telling us you need more chapters, isn’t that why Mikes still adding more? My People tho

  133. khethani Batwaks

    Thanks P, thandeka she doesn’t even respect you cos all the time she need help she phoned G. Give her a good lesson my brother…

  134. Nqobile Snothando

    No no no cc crep he can’t do this to you now tjoe askies well i guess his one of those JELOUSE TYPE than ncoee nana askies. Feel for you and knowing how you feel about him it sad

  135. Hloni

    i thought that was a stupid move. Why not call Python though he would have gladly helped you. i would have felt the same way as Python if my girlfrend was to contact my frend at first sign of trouble.

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